IELTS 4.0 → 5.0 · Tuần 10: Giáo dục · Buổi 48/90 · ~85 phút

Buổi 48: Writing Task 1 – Biểu đồ cột kết hợp đường (A) & thư xin hoãn khóa học (GT)

🎯 Sau buổi này bạn có thể

🔁 1. Ôn tập – 10 phút

🔁 Ôn thẻ từ vựng đến hạn

🧠 Nhớ lại buổi trước (không xem tài liệu)

  1. Y/N/NG khác T/F/NG ở điểm nào?
  2. Kể 3 cụm cho thấy ý kiến của tác giả.
  3. Thông báo của trường: “consent form” là gì?

Trả lời to hoặc viết ra giấy, rồi mới mở lại buổi trước để kiểm tra.

📊 2. Đầu vào – 20 phút

Nhánh Academic – cột + đường trên cùng một biểu đồ

Evening course students at Riverside College (hundreds)

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All evening students (bars)Of whom studied online (line)Số liệu giả định, chỉ dùng để luyện tập.

Ngôn ngữ tỉ lệ theo thời gian

  1. Total enrolment fell to 1,800 in 2021, but it to 2,800 two years later.
  2. In 2015, online students accounted for only a of the total (200 out of 2,000).
  3. By 2025, the of evening students (2,000 out of 3,200) studied online.
  4. Online learners made up a share of the total over the period.

📝 Viết bài – Academic

The chart shows the total number of evening course students at Riverside College and the number of those students who studied online between 2015 and 2025.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.

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👀 Xem bài mẫu tham khảo (sau khi đã viết xong)

Bài mẫu tham khảo do khóa học viết, khoảng 170 từ. Số liệu là giả định.

The chart illustrates how many students took evening courses at Riverside College between 2015 and 2025, and how many of them studied online.

Overall, the total number of evening students rose over the period, despite a fall in 2021. At the same time, online learners made up a growing share of the total, and by 2025 they were in the majority.

In 2015, there were 2,000 evening students. This figure increased gradually to 2,600 in 2019, before dropping to 1,800 in 2021. However, enrolment then recovered strongly, reaching 2,800 in 2023 and a peak of 3,200 in 2025.

Online study, by contrast, was very uncommon at first, with only 200 students in 2015 – about a tenth of the total. The number grew slowly to 400 in 2019 and then jumped to 1,400 in 2021. It continued to rise, to 1,600 in 2023 and 2,000 in 2025, when online students accounted for more than half of all evening learners.


Nhánh General Training – thư xin hoãn khóa học

Đoạn Câu mẫu
Bạn là ai I am currently enrolled on the Business English course (Tuesday and Thursday evenings), which starts on…
Lý do Unfortunately, due to a change in my working hours, I will not be able to attend…
Yêu cầu I would like to ask whether it would be possible to postpone my place until the next course in…
Hỏi thêm Could you also tell me whether there is any extra fee for this?

📝 Viết bài – General Training

You have paid for a course at a college, but you can no longer attend it at the planned time.

Write a letter to the course organiser. In your letter:

• give details of the course

• explain why you cannot attend

• say what you would like the college to do

Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Ms Taylor,

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👀 Xem bài mẫu tham khảo (sau khi đã viết xong)

Bài mẫu tham khảo do khóa học viết, khoảng 170 từ. Trường và khóa học là giả định.

Dear Ms Taylor,

I am writing about the Business English course at Riverside College, which I have enrolled on and paid for. The course takes place on Tuesday and Thursday evenings from 6.30 to 8.30 p.m. and is due to start on 3 November.

Unfortunately, my company has just asked me to work on a new project for the next three months, and I will need to stay at the office until about 8 p.m. on most weekdays. As a result, I will not be able to attend the classes at the planned time.

I am still very keen to take the course, as it is important for my job. I would therefore like to ask whether it would be possible to move my place to the next course, which I understand starts in February. If that is not possible, I would be grateful if you could tell me whether I can receive a partial refund.

Thank you for your understanding. I look forward to hearing from you.

Yours sincerely, Hoang Van Long

🧩 3. Ngôn ngữ trọng tâm – 10 phút

⚠️ due to + danh từ, because + mệnh đề: “due to I have to work” ✗ → “because I have to work” ✓ / “due to my work” ✓.

✍️ 4. Thực hành – 25 phút

Viết bài nhánh của bạn (20 phút). 5 phút kiểm tra: Academic – tổng quan có nối hai bộ số liệu không (a growing share)? GT – có đủ tên khóa, thời gian, lý do cụ thể, yêu cầu chính và phương án dự phòng không?

💼 Dùng ngay – email cho giáo viên của con (thêm 5–10 phút)

📝 Viết email (40–60 từ)

Your child is ill and will miss school for two days. Write an email to the class teacher. Explain the situation and ask about the work your child will miss.

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👀 Xem bài mẫu tham khảo (sau khi đã viết xong)

Bài mẫu tham khảo do khóa học viết; tên là giả định.

Dear Ms Anderson,

I'm writing to let you know that Minh has a high temperature and the doctor has advised him to stay at home today and tomorrow. Could you please let me know what work he will miss, so that he can catch up when he feels better?

Thank you for your help.

Kind regards, Nguyen Thi Thu

📚 Từ vựng của buổi

  • enrolment – số người đăng ký học

    Enrolment fell in 2021.

  • dip – sự giảm nhẹ, tạm thời

    There was a dip in 2021.

  • recover – phục hồi

    Numbers recovered quickly after 2021.

  • share – phần, tỉ lệ

    Online learners made up a growing share.

  • the majority – phần lớn, đa số

    By 2025, the majority studied online.

  • postpone – hoãn lại

    Could I postpone my course until February?

  • defer – hoãn (suất học, kỳ học)

    She deferred her place at university for a year.

  • circumstances – hoàn cảnh

    Due to personal circumstances, I cannot attend.

  • absence – sự vắng mặt

    Please explain the reason for the absence.

  • catch up – học bù, theo kịp

    He will catch up on the work next week.

✅ 5. Tự kiểm tra – 10 phút

✅ Tự kiểm tra

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