IELTS 6.0 → 6.5 · Tuần 12: Kinh doanh & khởi nghiệp · Buổi 58/105 · ~85 phút

Buổi 58: Writing Task 1 – Bảng tài chính nhiều số (A) & thư đề nghị hợp tác (GT)

🎯 Sau buổi này bạn có thể

🔁 1. Ôn tập – 10 phút

🔁 Ôn thẻ từ vựng đến hạn

🧠 Nhớ lại buổi trước (không xem tài liệu)

  1. Bảng số liệu (chặng 5-6): vì sao không mô tả từng ô?
  2. “Despite” + gì?
  3. Tính nhanh: 380 ÷ 14,2 ≈ ?

Trả lời to hoặc viết ra giấy, rồi mới mở lại buổi trước để kiểm tra.

📋 2. Đầu vào – 20 phút

Nhánh Academic

Revenue, costs, profit and customers of a café chain’s four branches, January–March 2026 (số liệu giả định)

Branch Revenue ($ thousands) Operating costs ($ thousands) Profit ($ thousands) Customers
North 420 310 110 18,500
Central 650 540 110 26,000
South 380 250 130 14,200
Airport 520 480 40 31,000

So sánh trong bảng

  1. generating the lowest revenue, the South branch made the highest profit.
  2. The Central branch had the highest revenue, but its operating costs were also the highest, so its profit was the as that of the North branch.
  3. Although the Airport branch served the most customers, it was by far the profitable.
  4. On average, each South customer spent roughly $27, with around $17 at the airport.

📝 Viết bài – Academic

The table shows the revenue, operating costs, profit and number of customers of four branches of a café chain in the first three months of 2026.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.

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👀 Xem bài mẫu tham khảo (sau khi đã viết xong)

Bài mẫu tham khảo do khóa học viết, khoảng 180 từ. Số liệu giả định; số tiền mỗi khách là ước lượng làm tròn.

The table compares four branches of a café chain in terms of their revenue, operating costs, profit and customer numbers between January and March 2026.

Overall, there was no clear link between the size of a branch and its profitability. The South branch, which had the lowest revenue and the fewest customers, was the most profitable, whereas the Airport branch, despite serving the most customers, earned the smallest profit.

The Central branch generated the highest revenue, at $650,000, followed by the Airport ($520,000), North ($420,000) and South ($380,000) branches. However, Central also had the highest operating costs, at $540,000, so its profit of $110,000 was exactly the same as that of the North branch.

The South branch made a profit of $130,000 with costs of only $250,000. By contrast, the Airport branch's costs of $480,000 left it with a profit of just $40,000, even though it attracted 31,000 customers – more than twice as many as the South branch (14,200). This means that each South customer spent roughly $27 on average, compared with around $17 at the airport.


Nhánh General Training – thư đề nghị hợp tác

Phần Câu mẫu (trang trọng)
Giới thiệu & mục đích I am writing on behalf of… to propose a partnership…
Đề xuất cụ thể We would like to suggest that… / Under this arrangement, …
Lợi ích cho hai bên This would allow your company to… while we…
Bước tiếp theo I would welcome the opportunity to discuss this further…

📝 Viết bài – General Training

You run a small business and would like to work together with another local business.

Write a letter to the manager of the other business. In your letter:

• introduce your business

• describe how the two businesses could work together

• explain how this would benefit both businesses

Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir or Madam,

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👀 Xem bài mẫu tham khảo (sau khi đã viết xong)

Bài mẫu tham khảo do khóa học viết, khoảng 190 từ. Doanh nghiệp và nhân vật là giả định.

Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing on behalf of Green Pedal, a bicycle repair and rental shop located two streets from your café, to propose a partnership between our businesses.

We opened three years ago and now rent out around thirty bicycles at weekends, mainly to young families and tourists exploring the riverside. Many of our customers ask us where they can stop for a drink or a light meal along the route.

We would like to suggest a simple arrangement. Our customers would receive a voucher for ten per cent off at your café when they rent a bicycle, and in return, your café would display our leaflets and offer a small discount on rentals to your regular customers. We would be happy to cover the cost of printing all the materials.

This would allow your café to attract new customers at weekends, which I understand can be a quieter time, while we would benefit from being recommended by a well-known local business. Neither business would need to make any significant investment.

I would welcome the opportunity to discuss this further and could visit at a time convenient for you.

Yours faithfully, Vu Quang Huy Owner, Green Pedal

🧩 3. Ngôn ngữ trọng tâm – 10 phút

✍️ 4. Thực hành – 25 phút

Viết bài nhánh của bạn (20 phút). 5 phút kiểm tra: Academic – tổng quan có nêu điểm “ngược đời”? Có chép cả bảng không (nếu có → cắt)? Phép tính đúng? GT – đề xuất có cụ thể và có lợi ích cho cả hai?

💼 Dùng ngay – email tiếp nối sau cuộc họp (thêm 5–10 phút)

📝 Email follow-up (50–70 từ)

After a meeting with a potential partner, write a short email: thank them, summarise what was agreed, and confirm the next step.

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👀 Xem bài mẫu tham khảo (sau khi đã viết xong)

Bài mẫu tham khảo do khóa học viết; tình huống giả định.

Subject: Thank you – next steps

Dear Ms Thao,

Thank you for meeting me this morning. To summarise, we agreed to trial the voucher scheme for two months, starting on 1 December, with Green Pedal covering the printing costs. I'll send the draft leaflet by Wednesday for your approval.

Best regards, Huy

📚 Từ vựng của buổi

  • revenue – doanh thu

    Revenue rose by ten per cent.

  • operating costs – chi phí vận hành

    Operating costs were very high.

  • profit – lợi nhuận

    The branch made a profit of $40,000.

  • branch – chi nhánh

    The chain has four branches.

  • per customer – trên mỗi khách

    Spending per customer was higher in the south.

  • account for – chiếm (tỉ lệ)

    Central accounted for the largest share of revenue.

  • generate – tạo ra

    The branch generated $650,000.

  • despite – mặc dù (+ N/V-ing)

    Despite its size, it made little profit.

  • the most profitable – có lãi nhất

    South was the most profitable branch.

  • proposal – đề xuất

    They accepted our proposal.

✅ 5. Tự kiểm tra – 10 phút

✅ Tự kiểm tra

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