IELTS 6.0 → 6.5 · Tuần 14: Y tế công cộng · Buổi 68/105 · ~85 phút

Buổi 68: Writing Task 1 – Biểu đồ đường 4 đường (A) & thư hỏi về chính sách bảo hiểm (GT)

🎯 Sau buổi này bạn có thể

🔁 1. Ôn tập – 10 phút

🔁 Ôn thẻ từ vựng đến hạn

🧠 Nhớ lại buổi trước (không xem tài liệu)

  1. Biểu đồ đường nhiều đường: nhóm theo gì?
  2. “marginally” khác “slightly” không?
  3. Nói 1 câu với “contribute to”.

Trả lời to hoặc viết ra giấy, rồi mới mở lại buổi trước để kiểm tra.

📈 2. Đầu vào – 20 phút

Nhánh Academic

Adults in Country H who walk or cycle to work, by age group (%) – số liệu giả định

081624324020102014201820222026%
18–2930–4445–5960+Số liệu giả định, chỉ dùng để luyện tập.

Ngôn ngữ cho nhiều đường

  1. The youngest group had the highest rate throughout the period.
  2. The figure for those aged 45–59 rose only , from 12% to 16%.
  3. The rate among people aged 60 and over remained stable, at between 6% and 8%.
  4. As a result, the gap between the youngest and oldest groups from 14 to 31 percentage points.

📝 Viết bài – Academic

The graph shows the percentage of adults in four age groups in Country H who walked or cycled to work between 2010 and 2026.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.

20:00
👀 Xem bài mẫu tham khảo (sau khi đã viết xong)

Bài mẫu tham khảo do khóa học viết, khoảng 175 từ. Số liệu giả định.

The line graph illustrates the proportion of adults in Country H who walked or cycled to work, broken down into four age groups, over the period from 2010 to 2026.

Overall, active commuting became more common among all groups under 60, with the most significant growth among the youngest adults. Throughout the period, people aged 18 to 29 had the highest rate, while those aged 60 and over consistently had the lowest, and the gap between them widened considerably.

In 2010, 22% of adults aged 18 to 29 walked or cycled to work, and this figure rose steadily to reach 38% in 2026. The rate for the 30–44 age group grew slowly at first, from 15% to 18% in 2018, before increasing more rapidly to 27% by the end of the period.

By contrast, the figure for people aged 45 to 59 rose only marginally, from 12% to 16%. The rate among those aged 60 and over remained broadly stable, fluctuating between 6% and 8%. As a result, the difference between the youngest and oldest groups more than doubled, from 14 to 31 percentage points.


Nhánh General Training – thư hỏi về chính sách bảo hiểm

Phần Câu mẫu (trang trọng)
Mục đích I am writing to request some information about my policy… (policy number…)
Bối cảnh I have recently… and would like to know whether…
Câu hỏi gián tiếp Could you please confirm whether…? / I would also like to know how…
Kết I would be grateful for a reply at your earliest convenience.

📝 Viết bài – General Training

You have health insurance through your employer, and you are not sure what your policy covers.

Write a letter to the insurance company. In your letter:

• explain your situation

• ask what is covered by your policy

• ask how to make a claim

Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir or Madam,

20:00
👀 Xem bài mẫu tham khảo (sau khi đã viết xong)

Bài mẫu tham khảo do khóa học viết, khoảng 185 từ. Công ty bảo hiểm, số hợp đồng và tình huống là giả định.

Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing to request some information about my health insurance policy, number NH-774-2208, which is provided through my employer, Lotus Logistics.

I moved to this city last month and have recently registered with a local clinic. However, the documents I received when I joined the company are quite brief, and I am not certain what my policy includes.

In particular, I would like to know whether the policy covers visits to a specialist if my GP gives me a referral, and whether dental check-ups are included. I would also be grateful if you could confirm the amount of the excess I am expected to pay for each visit, as the clinic mentioned a figure that was different from what I had understood.

Finally, could you please explain how to make a claim if I need treatment from a provider that does not send claims to you directly? I would like to know which documents I need to keep and how long the process usually takes.

I would be grateful for a reply at your earliest convenience.

Yours faithfully, Hanna Lindqvist

🧩 3. Ngôn ngữ trọng tâm – 10 phút

✍️ 4. Thực hành – 25 phút

Viết bài nhánh của bạn (20 phút). 5 phút kiểm tra: Academic – có gom 4 đường thành 2 nhóm? Dùng percentage points đúng chỗ? GT – câu hỏi gián tiếp đúng trật tự (whether the policy covers, không phải whether does the policy cover)?

💼 Dùng ngay – email xin nghỉ ốm (thêm 5–10 phút)

📝 Email xin nghỉ ốm (50–70 từ)

Write a short email to your manager: you are unwell and cannot come to work today. Say what will happen to your tasks and when you expect to return.

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👀 Xem bài mẫu tham khảo (sau khi đã viết xong)

Bài mẫu tham khảo do khóa học viết; tình huống giả định. Hãy làm theo quy định nghỉ ốm của công ty bạn.

Subject: Sick leave – today

Hi Ms Huong,

I'm sorry, but I'm not feeling well this morning and won't be able to come in today. I've moved my 2 p.m. call with the supplier to Thursday, and Lan has kindly agreed to cover any urgent emails. I hope to be back tomorrow and will let you know by 8 a.m. if anything changes.

Thanks for understanding, Duc Anh

📚 Từ vựng của buổi

  • commute – đi lại đến nơi làm việc

    My commute takes forty minutes.

  • age group – nhóm tuổi

    The youngest age group cycled most.

  • steady – đều đặn

    There was a steady rise.

  • fluctuate – dao động

    The rate fluctuated between 6% and 8%.

  • marginally – rất ít, không đáng kể

    The figure rose marginally.

  • widen – nới rộng

    The gap widened over time.

  • consistently – luôn luôn, nhất quán

    This group consistently had the lowest rate.

  • lowest – thấp nhất

    The 60+ group had the lowest figure.

  • policy – hợp đồng / chính sách bảo hiểm

    My policy covers GP visits.

  • entitled to – có quyền được hưởng

    Staff are entitled to a free health check.

✅ 5. Tự kiểm tra – 10 phút

✅ Tự kiểm tra

Nghe lại bản ghi của mình và tích những điểm bạn đã làm được. Ô tích chỉ lưu trên máy này.

Bài học do tienganhcanban.com tự viết. Đề, số liệu (giả định) và bài mẫu tự viết 25/10/2026. Bố cục Task 1 tham khảo phương pháp của IELTS Simon, diễn đạt lại. Thư bảo hiểm và email xin nghỉ là tình huống giả định để luyện ngôn ngữ.