IELTS 5.0 → 6.0 · Tuần 2: Sức khỏe & lối sống · Buổi 8/90 · ~85 phút

Buổi 8: Writing Task 1 – Biểu đồ cột nhiều nhóm (A) & thư hỏi về bảo hiểm (GT)

🎯 Sau buổi này bạn có thể

🔁 1. Ôn tập – 10 phút

🔁 Ôn thẻ từ vựng đến hạn

🧠 Nhớ lại buổi trước (không xem tài liệu)

  1. Matching headings: làm gì khi hai tiêu đề đều có vẻ đúng?
  2. “Excess” trong bảo hiểm là gì?
  3. Biểu đồ không có năm (chặng trước, buổi 28): tổng quan tìm gì?

Trả lời to hoặc viết ra giấy, rồi mới mở lại buổi trước để kiểm tra.

📊 2. Đầu vào – 20 phút

Nhánh Academic – hai nhóm, bốn độ tuổi

Adults in Country P who exercised at least 150 minutes a week, by age and gender (2025)

0122436486018–2930–4445–5960+%
MenWomenSố liệu giả định, chỉ dùng để luyện tập.

So sánh chính xác

  1. Among 18- to 29-year-olds, the figure for men (55%) was 7 percentage points than that for women (48%).
  2. The gap between men and women to 5 points in the 30–44 group.
  3. In the 45–59 group, women men, at 41% compared with 38%.
  4. Only 30% of men aged 60 and over exercised regularly, the figure for women was 35%.

📝 Viết bài – Academic

The bar chart shows the percentage of men and women in four age groups in Country P who exercised for at least 150 minutes a week in 2025.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.

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👀 Xem bài mẫu tham khảo (sau khi đã viết xong)

Bài mẫu tham khảo do khóa học viết, khoảng 175 từ. Số liệu là giả định.

The bar chart compares the proportions of men and women in four age groups in Country P who did at least 150 minutes of exercise per week in 2025.

Overall, the likelihood of exercising regularly decreased with age for both genders. However, while men were more active than women in the two younger age groups, women overtook men from the age of 45.

Among adults aged 18 to 29, 55% of men exercised regularly, which was 7 percentage points higher than the figure for women, at 48%. In the 30–44 age group, both figures were lower, at 45% for men and 40% for women, so the gap between the two genders narrowed slightly.

The pattern changed among older adults. In the 45–59 group, the proportion of women who exercised regularly rose slightly to 41%, overtaking the figure for men, which fell to 38%. The same was true of people aged 60 and over: 35% of women met the target, compared with only 30% of men, the lowest figure in the chart.


Nhánh General Training – thư hỏi thông tin (trang trọng)

Thư trang trọng hỏi thông tin ở band 6: giới thiệu ngắn hoàn cảnh → 3 câu hỏi rõ ràng, mỗi câu một đoạn hoặc một ý → kết lịch sự.

Mẫu câu hỏi gián tiếp Ví dụ
Could you please tell me whether + mệnh đề? Could you please tell me whether my children can be added to my policy?
I would like to know how much + mệnh đề I would like to know how much the monthly premium would increase.
I would also appreciate information about + danh từ I would also appreciate information about the waiting period.

📝 Viết bài – General Training

You have health insurance through a private company. You would like to add members of your family to your policy.

Write a letter to the insurance company. In your letter:

• give details of your current policy

• explain who you would like to add and why

• ask about the cost and any conditions

Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir or Madam,

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👀 Xem bài mẫu tham khảo (sau khi đã viết xong)

Bài mẫu tham khảo do khóa học viết, khoảng 180 từ. Công ty và số hợp đồng là giả định.

Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing to enquire about adding members of my family to my health insurance policy. I have held an individual policy with your company for the past three years, and my policy number is HP-48217.

My wife and our two children, aged nine and four, recently moved to join me in the city after living with my parents in the countryside. As they will now be living here permanently, I would like them to be covered by the same policy, so that we can use the same clinics and hospitals.

Could you please tell me how much my monthly premium would increase if I added three family members? I would also like to know whether there is a waiting period before they can make a claim, and whether any medical check-ups are required before they join.

Finally, I would appreciate information about how to apply, including which documents I would need to send.

I look forward to your reply.

Yours faithfully, Vu Quoc Anh

🧩 3. Ngôn ngữ trọng tâm – 10 phút

⚠️ Lỗi hay gặp: “Could you tell me how much does it cost?” ✗ → “Could you tell me how much it costs?” ✓

✍️ 4. Thực hành – 25 phút

Viết bài nhánh của bạn (20 phút). 5 phút kiểm tra: Academic – tổng quan có nhắc điểm đảo chiều không? GT – 3 câu hỏi có đúng trật tự câu hỏi gián tiếp không?

💼 Dùng ngay – nhắn quản lý xin nghỉ ốm (thêm 5–10 phút)

📝 Viết tin nhắn (35–50 từ)

You are ill and cannot go to work today. Write a message to your manager. Say what is wrong, how long you expect to be off, and what will happen to your urgent work.

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👀 Xem bài mẫu tham khảo (sau khi đã viết xong)

Bài mẫu tham khảo do khóa học viết.

Hi Ms Thao, I'm sorry, but I woke up with a high fever and I'm going to see a doctor this morning. I expect to be off today and tomorrow. Nam has agreed to send the client report this afternoon. I'll send you the doctor's note later. Thanks.

📚 Từ vựng của buổi

  • proportion – tỉ lệ

    The proportion of women who exercised was higher.

  • age group – nhóm tuổi

    The chart shows four age groups.

  • gender – giới tính

    The figures are shown by gender.

  • the gap – khoảng cách, chênh lệch

    The gap between men and women narrowed.

  • narrow – thu hẹp

    The difference narrowed to 5 points.

  • widen – nới rộng

    The gap widened after 2020.

  • overtake – vượt qua

    Women overtook men in the older groups.

  • enquire – hỏi thông tin

    I am writing to enquire about your policy.

  • dependant – người phụ thuộc (vợ/chồng, con)

    Can I add my dependants to the policy?

  • premium – phí bảo hiểm

    The monthly premium will increase.

✅ 5. Tự kiểm tra – 10 phút

✅ Tự kiểm tra

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