IELTS 6.0 → 6.5 · Tuần 3: Kiến trúc & thiết kế đô thị · Buổi 13/105 · ~85 phút

Buổi 13: Writing Task 1 – Bản đồ 3 mốc nhiều thay đổi (A) & thư góp ý thiết kế công trình (GT)

🎯 Sau buổi này bạn có thể

🔁 1. Ôn tập – 10 phút

🔁 Ôn thẻ từ vựng đến hạn

🧠 Nhớ lại buổi trước (không xem tài liệu)

  1. Summary không hộp từ: kiểm tra 3 điều gì?
  2. Bản đồ trước – sau (chặng trước): dùng thì gì?
  3. Câu chẻ: “It was… that…” – nói 1 câu.

Trả lời to hoặc viết ra giấy, rồi mới mở lại buổi trước để kiểm tra.

🗺️ 2. Đầu vào – 20 phút

Nhánh Academic – khu bờ sông qua 3 mốc

Eastport waterfront – 1980WarehousesFactoryRail yardHarbour RoadRiver – cargo docksN
Bản đồ giả định, khóa học tự vẽ.
Eastport waterfront – 2000Apartments(converted warehouses)Factory (closed)Car parkHarbour RoadRiver – marinaN
Bản đồ giả định, khóa học tự vẽ.
Eastport waterfront – 2025ApartmentsArts centre(former factory)ParkTramstopHarbour Walk (pedestrians & cyclists)River – marinaN
Bản đồ giả định, khóa học tự vẽ.

Động từ thay đổi đa dạng

  1. By 2000, the warehouses had been apartments.
  2. The rail yard a car park.
  3. In the final period, the car park was removed to a park and a tram stop.
  4. Harbour Road was and renamed Harbour Walk.

📝 Viết bài – Academic

The maps show the Eastport waterfront area in 1980, 2000 and 2025.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.

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👀 Xem bài mẫu tham khảo (sau khi đã viết xong)

Bài mẫu tham khảo do khóa học viết, khoảng 175 từ. Bản đồ là giả định.

The maps illustrate how the Eastport waterfront changed over three stages between 1980 and 2025.

Overall, the area was transformed from an industrial zone into a residential and cultural district, with the changes taking place in two main phases. The river remained a central feature throughout, although its use changed from commercial to recreational.

In 1980, the waterfront was dominated by industry, with warehouses, a factory and a rail yard lining Harbour Road, and cargo docks along the river. By 2000, the warehouses had been converted into apartments and the factory had closed. The rail yard gave way to a car park, while the cargo docks were replaced by a marina.

The second phase brought further changes. The disused factory was redeveloped as an arts centre, and the car park was removed to make way for a small park and a tram stop. Most noticeably, Harbour Road was pedestrianised and became Harbour Walk, a route for pedestrians and cyclists along the river.


Nhánh General Training – thư góp ý thiết kế công trình công cộng

Góp ý cân bằng: khen cụ thể → 1–2 vấn đề có ảnh hưởng thật → đề xuất khả thi. Giọng xây dựng.

📝 Viết bài – General Training

A new community centre has recently opened in your area.

Write a letter to the local council. In your letter:

• say what you like about the new building

• describe a problem with its design

• suggest how the problem could be solved

Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir or Madam,

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👀 Xem bài mẫu tham khảo (sau khi đã viết xong)

Bài mẫu tham khảo do khóa học viết, khoảng 185 từ. Công trình là giả định.

Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing to give my feedback on the new community centre on Hoa Binh Street, which I have visited several times since it opened last month.

Overall, I am very impressed with the building. The large windows make the main hall bright and welcoming, and the rooftop garden has quickly become a popular place for older residents to meet. The children's library is also well designed, with plenty of comfortable seating.

However, I would like to draw your attention to a problem with accessibility. Although there is a lift, the only ramp to the main entrance is at the back of the building, and it is not clearly signposted. Last week, I saw a wheelchair user and a parent with a pushchair struggling to find it, and they eventually had to ask staff for help.

I would suggest adding clear signage at the front entrance and, in the longer term, building a second ramp beside the main steps. These changes would make the centre genuinely accessible to everyone.

Thank you for considering my suggestions.

Yours faithfully, Dang Thi Kim

🧩 3. Ngôn ngữ trọng tâm – 10 phút

✍️ 4. Thực hành – 25 phút

Viết bài nhánh của bạn (20 phút). 5 phút kiểm tra: Academic – có kể theo hai giai đoạn, dùng ít nhất 4 động từ thay đổi khác nhau? GT – vấn đề có ví dụ cụ thể và đề xuất khả thi?

💼 Dùng ngay – góp ý về thiết kế lại văn phòng (thêm 5–10 phút)

📝 Email góp ý (50–80 từ)

Your office has just been redesigned. Write a short email to the facilities team with one positive comment and one suggestion.

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👀 Xem bài mẫu tham khảo (sau khi đã viết xong)

Bài mẫu tham khảo do khóa học viết; tình huống giả định.

Hi Facilities team,

Thanks for the office redesign – the new open area feels much brighter, and the standing desks are really popular. One suggestion: the two phone booths are almost always full, so people end up taking calls at their desks, which is noisy for others. Would it be possible to add one or two more booths, or turn the small storage room into a quiet call room?

Best, Tuan

📚 Từ vựng của buổi

  • redevelop – tái phát triển

    The factory was redeveloped as an arts centre.

  • give way to – nhường chỗ cho

    The rail yard gave way to a car park.

  • make way for – dọn chỗ cho

    Trees were cut down to make way for a road.

  • convert – chuyển đổi

    Warehouses were converted into flats.

  • demolish – phá dỡ

    The old bridge was demolished.

  • pedestrian – người đi bộ; dành cho người đi bộ

    The street is now pedestrian-only.

  • waterfront – khu bờ sông/bờ biển

    The waterfront has become popular.

  • accessible – dễ tiếp cận

    Public buildings should be accessible to all.

  • ramp – đường dốc (cho xe lăn)

    There is only one ramp.

  • signage – biển chỉ dẫn

    Better signage is needed.

✅ 5. Tự kiểm tra – 10 phút

✅ Tự kiểm tra

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