IELTS 6.0 → 6.5 · Tuần 4: Luật pháp & xã hội · Buổi 20/105 · ~85 phút

Buổi 20: Writing Task 2 – Discussion: phạt nặng hay giáo dục để giảm vi phạm giao thông

🎯 Sau buổi này bạn có thể

🔁 1. Ôn tập – 10 phút

🔁 Ôn thẻ từ vựng đến hạn

🧠 Nhớ lại buổi trước (không xem tài liệu)

  1. Nhượng bộ – phản bác (buổi 17): kể 3 cụm.
  2. Bị động tường thuật: “Harsh fines ___ (believe) to deter drivers.”
  3. Ý kiến có điều kiện (buổi 10) viết thế nào?

Trả lời to hoặc viết ra giấy, rồi mới mở lại buổi trước để kiểm tra.

✍️ 2. Đầu vào – 20 phút

Some people think that the best way to reduce traffic offences is to introduce much heavier fines and penalties. Others believe that education and awareness campaigns are more effective. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Bị động tường thuật & thận trọng

  1. It that heavier fines would make drivers more careful.
  2. Harsh penalties deter dangerous behaviour.
  3. Education alone change the behaviour of repeat offenders.
  4. Awareness campaigns be most effective with young drivers.

🧩 3. Ngôn ngữ trọng tâm – 10 phút: cụm từ an toàn giao thông

Cụm Ví dụ
commit a traffic offence Drivers who commit serious traffic offences should lose their licence.
impose harsh penalties Governments could impose harsh penalties for drink-driving.
deter people from + V-ing Fines may deter people from speeding.
raise awareness of Campaigns raise awareness of the dangers of using phones while driving.
bring about lasting behavioural change Education can bring about lasting behavioural change.
complement one another The two approaches complement one another.

✍️ 4. Thực hành – 25 phút (viết 40 phút nếu luyện như thi thật)

📝 Viết bài Task 2

Some people think that the best way to reduce traffic offences is to introduce much heavier fines and penalties. Others believe that education and awareness campaigns are more effective.

Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Write at least 250 words.

40:00
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Traffic offences such as speeding and running red lights put lives at risk every day, and there is considerable debate about how best to reduce them. While some people believe that much heavier penalties are the answer, others argue that education is more effective. In my view, the two approaches work best together, but they serve different purposes.

It is often argued that tougher fines and penalties are the quickest way to change drivers' behaviour. Heavy penalties are thought to deter people because the consequences of being caught become too costly to ignore. For example, if drivers knew that using a phone at the wheel would lead to losing their licence for six months, many would think twice before picking it up. Supporters also point out that penalties send a clear message that society takes dangerous driving seriously.

On the other hand, those who favour education believe that fear of punishment only works when people expect to be caught. Since police cannot be present on every road, they argue that lasting change comes from drivers understanding why the rules matter. Campaigns that show the real consequences of accidents, or road safety lessons in schools, tend to influence young people before they develop bad habits. Admittedly, such campaigns take time to produce results, and they are unlikely to change the behaviour of repeat offenders on their own.

In my opinion, education should be seen as the long-term foundation, while penalties are necessary for those who ignore the rules regardless. Teaching road safety from a young age would gradually reduce the number of offences, and strict enforcement would deal with the minority who continue to take risks.

In conclusion, rather than choosing between punishment and education, governments should combine them, using each where it is most effective.

👉 Sau khi viết: gạch các câu nêu quan điểm người khác – có dùng bị động tường thuật không? Ý kiến của bạn có nói rõ vai trò của mỗi bên không?

💼 Dùng ngay – nhắc nhở đồng nghiệp về một quy định (thêm 5–10 phút)

📝 Tin nhắn nhắc nhở (40–60 từ)

Write a short, friendly reminder to your team about a rule that some people have been forgetting (e.g. locking the office, clearing the meeting room).

8:00
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Bài mẫu tham khảo do khóa học viết; tình huống giả định.

Hi team, a quick reminder: please make sure the meeting rooms are cleared and the screens are switched off after use. A few rooms have been left with cups and papers recently, which isn't great when clients arrive. Thanks for helping keep things tidy! 🙂

📚 Từ vựng của buổi

  • traffic offence – vi phạm giao thông

    Speeding is a common traffic offence.

  • harsh penalty – hình phạt nặng

    Harsh penalties may deter drivers.

  • deter – răn đe, ngăn chặn

    Fines deter people from speeding.

  • awareness campaign – chiến dịch nâng cao nhận thức

    The awareness campaign targeted young drivers.

  • enforcement – sự thực thi

    Strict enforcement is needed.

  • behavioural change – thay đổi hành vi

    Education brings lasting behavioural change.

  • repeat offender – người tái phạm

    Repeat offenders should lose their licence.

  • road safety – an toàn giao thông

    Road safety lessons start at school.

  • complement – bổ sung cho nhau

    The two approaches complement each other.

  • reminder – lời nhắc

    Here's a quick reminder.

✅ 5. Tự kiểm tra – 10 phút

✅ Tự kiểm tra

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